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PostSubject: Lion and Lamb - By Shady   Mon Apr 13, 2009 2:32 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Lion and Lamb - By Shady   Mon Apr 13, 2009 7:18 pm

I love it man
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Great symbolism

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PostSubject: Re: Lion and Lamb - By Shady   Mon Apr 13, 2009 7:20 pm

I enjoyed it. I absolutely love poetry like that - symbolism and metaphor, not just rhyme. I hardly ever rhyme in my poetry
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PostSubject: Re: Lion and Lamb - By Shady   Mon Apr 13, 2009 7:54 pm

Thanks alot guys it really means alot to me, i was really nervous posting and to have you guys, especially a great writer like byd giving me a thumbs up really means alot to me. Also if this comes out weird im using my mobile and will edit tommorow
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PostSubject: Re: Lion and Lamb - By Shady   Mon Apr 13, 2009 8:13 pm

It's really good dude. I enjoy reading other peoples stuff because I write myself, but my skills are lacking lol. I'm writing a novel now and seeing how you guys write your things helps me learn some techniques to use.
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PostSubject: Re: Lion and Lamb - By Shady   Mon Apr 13, 2009 8:20 pm

You are the lion and the lamb
You are the creed I should be who I am
Would it spoil some vast eternal plan?
If I was a wealthy man

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PostSubject: Re: Lion and Lamb - By Shady   Sun Apr 19, 2009 8:28 am

Wow Shady that was really good I love poems with metaphors. You really should write more more poems Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Lion and Lamb - By Shady   Sun Apr 19, 2009 2:13 pm

Thanks Shin, really nice of you Smile

I will definitely be writing more and hopefully some will be good enough to post.
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