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PostSubject: ADDICTED NATION ( DEMOS ) FINAL CUT ADDED 8/12/09   Sun Jul 26, 2009 9:49 pm

Here are a few tracks for my album " ADDICTED NATION " , Vox have not been done on most of the songs and they need to be mixed better but this is what i have so far .. A few of the songs may not be to some of your tastes but its what i felt when i laid them down .

FINAL CUT'S

SUMMER SUN
rapidshare.com SUMMER_SUN___FINAL_CUT__.mp3.html


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DEMO'S


ADDICTED NATION
rapidshare.com ADDICTED_NATION_.wma.html

SLIP TO FADE
rapidshare.com SLIP_TO_FADE.wma.html

JUST TO BE HOME
rapidshare.com JUST_TO_BE_HOME.wma.html

OIL IT UP
rapidshare.com OIL_IT_UP.wma.html

COLD DAY IN JULY part 2
rapidshare.com COLD_DAY_IN_JULY__part_2.wma.html

SHOOT BANG BANG
rapidshare.com SHOOT_BANG_BANG.wma.html

THE GREAT EVIL
rapidshare.com THE_GREAT_EVIL_.wma.html

SUMMER SUN
rapidshare.com SUMMER_SUN.wma.html

WHO'S WATCHING THE FIRE
rapidshare.com WHO_S_WATCHING_THE_FIRE_.wma.html

LOVE IS LEXI ( WILD FLOWERS )
rapidshare.com LOVE_IS_LEXI___WILD_FLOWERS__.wma.html

FIST , FACE , FLOOR
rapidshare.com FIST___FACE___FLOOR_.mp3.html

RUNNING FROM THE PAST
rapidshare.com RUNNING_FROM_THE_PAST.mp3.html

COMING HOME
rapidshare.com COMING_HOME.mp3.html

SLIDE
rapidshare.com SLIDE.mp3.html

SLIPPING DOWN
rapidshare.com SLIPPING_DOWN.mp3.html

KRW
rapidshare.com KRW.mp3.html

PAIN KILLER
rapidshare.com PAIN_KILLER.mp3.html


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PostSubject: Re: ADDICTED NATION ( DEMOS ) FINAL CUT ADDED 8/12/09   Sun Jul 26, 2009 9:57 pm

Can you make some mp3 for me hate?

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PostSubject: Re: ADDICTED NATION ( DEMOS ) FINAL CUT ADDED 8/12/09   Sun Jul 26, 2009 10:22 pm

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Can you make some mp3 for me hate?
Do you have yahoo messenger ? If so let me know and i will send them to you in mp3 form .
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PostSubject: Re: ADDICTED NATION ( DEMOS ) FINAL CUT ADDED 8/12/09   Sun Jul 26, 2009 10:25 pm

Unfortunately no, want my email?

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PostSubject: Re: ADDICTED NATION ( DEMOS ) FINAL CUT ADDED 8/12/09   Sun Jul 26, 2009 10:28 pm

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Unfortunately no, want my email?
Yea , PM me.
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PostSubject: Re: ADDICTED NATION ( DEMOS ) FINAL CUT ADDED 8/12/09   Sun Jul 26, 2009 11:04 pm

You sent me .wma files bro, can't open those

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PostSubject: Re: ADDICTED NATION ( DEMOS ) FINAL CUT ADDED 8/12/09   Sun Jul 26, 2009 11:12 pm

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You sent me .wma files bro, can't open those
AW HELL .. Give me a few to turn the wave to mp3 k
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PostSubject: Re: ADDICTED NATION ( DEMOS ) FINAL CUT ADDED 8/12/09   Mon Jul 27, 2009 12:39 am

Yeah sure man np, thanks

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PostSubject: Re: ADDICTED NATION ( DEMOS ) FINAL CUT ADDED 8/12/09   Mon Jul 27, 2009 12:40 am

Sounds *higher more melodic voice* siiiiiiick. Bring more along with you.
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PostSubject: Re: ADDICTED NATION ( DEMOS ) FINAL CUT ADDED 8/12/09   Mon Jul 27, 2009 1:16 am

Downloading right now. Can't wait to here it bro. I want to know, can I make you album art for that? lol
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PostSubject: Re: ADDICTED NATION ( DEMOS ) FINAL CUT ADDED 8/12/09   Mon Jul 27, 2009 1:21 am

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Downloading right now. Can't wait to here it bro. I want to know, can I make you album art for that? lol
I will take all the art / help i can get !
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PostSubject: Re: ADDICTED NATION ( DEMOS ) FINAL CUT ADDED 8/12/09   Mon Jul 27, 2009 1:24 am

DUDE, could I draw Uncle Sam shooting up on heroin for Addicted Nation?
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PostSubject: Re: ADDICTED NATION ( DEMOS ) FINAL CUT ADDED 8/12/09   Mon Jul 27, 2009 1:36 am

Go for it. Let's make the album art a collage of Metalisfav art! If Hate thinks that's a cool idea. Hey man, does your band have a stylized name or anything? If you do, could you send it to me?
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PostSubject: Re: ADDICTED NATION ( DEMOS ) FINAL CUT ADDED 8/12/09   Mon Jul 27, 2009 1:37 am

Hate is a monster shredder
Hot damn

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PostSubject: Re: ADDICTED NATION ( DEMOS ) FINAL CUT ADDED 8/12/09   Mon Jul 27, 2009 1:45 am

I know, Hate can shred so hard, children grow up die and reborn themselves.
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PostSubject: Re: ADDICTED NATION ( DEMOS ) FINAL CUT ADDED 8/12/09   Mon Jul 27, 2009 1:59 am

WOW thank you guys so much ,, And the art work .. MAKE IT AND I WILL USE IT , I need cover . inside x 2 and back .. And no , the band is me and its just hateyou1st if you find a kool way to make it it will be killer...
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PostSubject: Re: ADDICTED NATION ( DEMOS ) FINAL CUT ADDED 8/12/09   Mon Jul 27, 2009 2:00 am

I will have it done later, I need to draw Uncle Sam shooting up on heroin lol.
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PostSubject: Re: ADDICTED NATION ( DEMOS ) FINAL CUT ADDED 8/12/09   Mon Jul 27, 2009 2:10 am

I cant wait !
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PostSubject: Re: ADDICTED NATION ( DEMOS ) FINAL CUT ADDED 8/12/09   Mon Jul 27, 2009 3:29 am

Dude this is going to be epic. I'm going to make just the cover with a cool border and his name stylized in some way. I'll also make a simple back sleeve. Then when we get some the graphics done we can photoshop them together
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PostSubject: Re: ADDICTED NATION ( DEMOS ) FINAL CUT ADDED 8/12/09   Mon Jul 27, 2009 3:47 am

Sounds good , i got more songs but there not near done but i will add some as they get done , well close to it lol
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PostSubject: Re: ADDICTED NATION ( DEMOS ) FINAL CUT ADDED 8/12/09   Mon Jul 27, 2009 3:57 am

Here's what I got. I will put Links pic on there when he is done

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PostSubject: Re: ADDICTED NATION ( DEMOS ) FINAL CUT ADDED 8/12/09   Mon Jul 27, 2009 4:42 am

This is what kim came up with but i want all the art i can get ! Its ok but i want something more , i love your ideas axe , link and cant wait to see it when its done ,, btw what you got looks killer ..

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PostSubject: Re: ADDICTED NATION ( DEMOS ) FINAL CUT ADDED 8/12/09   Mon Jul 27, 2009 4:45 am

Yeah it's pretty plain right now, but I'm saving that huge gap in the middle for links pic.

Kim's looks very good. A lot better than mine lol. Plus that font is a lot cooler I think
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PostSubject: Re: ADDICTED NATION ( DEMOS ) FINAL CUT ADDED 8/12/09   Mon Jul 27, 2009 12:18 pm

Don't wanna close mah eyessss

This is awesome- I am stickying this

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PostSubject: Re: ADDICTED NATION ( DEMOS ) FINAL CUT ADDED 8/12/09   Mon Jul 27, 2009 2:22 pm

For the 1st time i feel like this may just work , I have tryed to make a album in the past but it died fast but with your guys help this just may be my chance to get something out there . Also you know anyone thats wants a copy from here gets it ,And if you do work on the album your name will be on it ..I have to ask if you guys dont care would you give me a run down on the songs ? Let me know if there good . You could rate them 1 to 10 on each song so i could figger out whats going to make it and whats not .. Also the songs are not done , they all need something , It may need better mixxing or vox but this was just a leak for my friends ..
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PostSubject: Re: ADDICTED NATION ( DEMOS ) FINAL CUT ADDED 8/12/09   Mon Jul 27, 2009 2:26 pm

Dude, we'll get you that album done man. I'll start working on the inserts and back later today, then I'll resize all of it so they'll fit in a case. I'll resize Kim's too because you absolutely have to use that, it's awesome.

Also, if you want to write a few things down for a booklet I can make you one. I've made albums like that before so I think I could do it for you
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PostSubject: Re: ADDICTED NATION ( DEMOS ) FINAL CUT ADDED 8/12/09   Mon Jul 27, 2009 2:30 pm

Hate, I showed your demos to some of my friends and they would all like an album. I also finished my uncle sam herion picture, who should I send it to?
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PostSubject: Re: ADDICTED NATION ( DEMOS ) FINAL CUT ADDED 8/12/09   Mon Jul 27, 2009 2:31 pm

Just post it up here and I'll stick it on the cover
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PostSubject: Re: ADDICTED NATION ( DEMOS ) FINAL CUT ADDED 8/12/09   Mon Jul 27, 2009 2:32 pm

Dammit it won't let me download the rest
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PostSubject: Re: ADDICTED NATION ( DEMOS ) FINAL CUT ADDED 8/12/09   Mon Jul 27, 2009 4:53 pm

I will review them all for ya

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PostSubject: Re: ADDICTED NATION ( DEMOS ) FINAL CUT ADDED 8/12/09   Mon Jul 27, 2009 8:58 pm

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Hate, I showed your demos to some of my friends and they would all like an album. I also finished my uncle sam herion picture, who should I send it to?
POST THAT SUCKER !! I WANT TO SEE IT !!
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PostSubject: Re: ADDICTED NATION ( DEMOS ) FINAL CUT ADDED 8/12/09   Mon Jul 27, 2009 8:59 pm

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I will review them all for ya
Thank you so much bro ,,
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PostSubject: Re: ADDICTED NATION ( DEMOS ) FINAL CUT ADDED 8/12/09   Tue Jul 28, 2009 12:31 am


it sucks but there it is, if any wiz at photoshop cares to resize it and make it better, please do lol.
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PostSubject: Re: ADDICTED NATION ( DEMOS ) FINAL CUT ADDED 8/12/09   Tue Jul 28, 2009 12:45 am

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it sucks but there it is, if any wiz at photoshop cares to resize it and make it better, please do lol.
DUDE THATS BAD ASS !! THANK YOU .....
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PostSubject: Re: ADDICTED NATION ( DEMOS ) FINAL CUT ADDED 8/12/09   Tue Jul 28, 2009 1:08 am

Link you can draw and guitar? You badass mofo

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PostSubject: Re: ADDICTED NATION ( DEMOS ) FINAL CUT ADDED 8/12/09   Tue Jul 28, 2009 1:22 am

Lol hate you only sent me 3 songs that are mp3, the rest are still wma
Anyway

The track titled "Track 4"
-First off- its a very head bangin' track. Reminds me of AC/DC. Although, I can't help but thinking singing would drastically help it. Overall its a solid track of simply laying down a good tempo

"Track 5"- It surprised me how you could successfully capture almost a pop song so well. This is the kind of song I would want to dance with if I had a special someone to be with. This song pretty much makes me think about my past automatically without me even listening to the lyrics. This is a very powerful track. If there was a jaw dropping solo in the middle it would be the best love? song ever.

Track 8- This is very similar to track 4, other the verse notes are more enjoyable to listen to. Short sweet, to the point. Its a good quick listen

Hate, if you send me your other songs or even your old songs in mp3 I'd gladly continue to review

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PostSubject: Re: ADDICTED NATION ( DEMOS ) FINAL CUT ADDED 8/12/09   Tue Jul 28, 2009 1:49 am

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Lol hate you only sent me 3 songs that are mp3, the rest are still wma
Anyway

The track titled "Track 4"
-First off- its a very head bangin' track. Reminds me of AC/DC. Although, I can't help but thinking singing would drastically help it. Overall its a solid track of simply laying down a good tempo

"Track 5"- It surprised me how you could successfully capture almost a pop song so well. This is the kind of song I would want to dance with if I had a special someone to be with. This song pretty much makes me think about my past automatically without me even listening to the lyrics. This is a very powerful track. If there was a jaw dropping solo in the middle it would be the best love? song ever.

Track 8- This is very similar to track 4, other the verse notes are more enjoyable to listen to. Short sweet, to the point. Its a good quick listen

Hate, if you send me your other songs or even your old songs in mp3 I'd gladly continue to review
Thank you , i will work to get them to you in the next 30 min ok ..
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PostSubject: Re: ADDICTED NATION ( DEMOS ) FINAL CUT ADDED 8/12/09   Tue Jul 28, 2009 1:58 am

BYD , I am going to send you 90% of the demo tracks for the album , Please remember that vox has not been laid on most and they all are going to get mixxed by a pro when i get everything laid down , I just wanted to find out what my friend think .. And i know that you will tell me the truth if a song blows or not ..
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PostSubject: Re: ADDICTED NATION ( DEMOS ) FINAL CUT ADDED 8/12/09   Tue Jul 28, 2009 10:10 am

ok i gave it a shot and i regret to tell you but you kick ass. pretty good stuff there. i'll go over each song later on since i'm in a bit of a rush today, and i minor moral dilemma
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PostSubject: Re: ADDICTED NATION ( DEMOS ) FINAL CUT ADDED 8/12/09   Wed Jul 29, 2009 4:06 am

ok so here a few thoughts on some songs that left a big impression

just to be home - i'm using this one for my next vid so sue me if you want to. that's how great it is

the great evil - awww for me? you shouldn't have. this song is kick ass as your rotten (or truly if you want)

shoot bang bang - why do you had to make it so short. damn you! really a great little song that could end up being my ringtone

summer sun - ok you really do hate me? i could imagine myself goin' to the coast and just enjoying the fresh breeze in my cadillac, ofc a convertible. too bad that there is no rest for me

lixi is love (wild flower) - why does the image of hippy kids playing around keep on popping up in my mind when i hear this one? you got it down and childish (can't say dirty, there are kids involved)

cold day in july part 2 - i think this next statement covers it all - boni and i shut the tv and just sat while it was playing. after it she just said - "really great, you can feel it all. every tone is so f***ing clear."
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PostSubject: Re: ADDICTED NATION ( DEMOS ) FINAL CUT ADDED 8/12/09   Wed Jul 29, 2009 11:58 am

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ok so here a few thoughts on some songs that left a big impression

just to be home - i'm using this one for my next vid so sue me if you want to. that's how great it is

the great evil - awww for me? you shouldn't have. this song is kick ass as your rotten (or truly if you want)

shoot bang bang - why do you had to make it so short. damn you! really a great little song that could end up being my ringtone

summer sun - ok you really do hate me? i could imagine myself goin' to the coast and just enjoying the fresh breeze in my cadillac, ofc a convertible. too bad that there is no rest for me

lixi is love (wild flower) - why does the image of hippy kids playing around keep on popping up in my mind when i hear this one? you got it down and childish (can't say dirty, there are kids involved)

cold day in july part 2 - i think this next statement covers it all - boni and i shut the tv and just sat while it was playing. after it she just said - "really great, you can feel it all. every tone is so f***ing clear."
Thank you so much , I worked on a few tracks last night , but im not a master of the mix yet lol ..
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PostSubject: Re: ADDICTED NATION ( DEMOS ) FINAL CUT ADDED 8/12/09   Fri Jul 31, 2009 12:47 am

Addicted nation intro- To be honest- if this wasn't an intro song I wouldn't think it would be acceptable. But since it is, I'd say leave it. Listening to this is something to think about- soothing

Addicted Nation- I see why you made this the album name. Very headbang worthy. If it were up to me I would make that heavy shred around 1:30 the chorous just because its so damn awesome.

Summer Sun- Already reviewed this. Here it is again lol. It surprised me how you could successfully capture almost a pop song so well. This is the kind of song I would want to dance with if I had a special someone to be with. This song pretty much makes me think about my past automatically without me even listening to the lyrics. This is a very powerful track. If there was a jaw dropping solo in the middle it would be the best love? song ever. Once again props. Out of the 3 songs this is so far my favourite.

Slip to fade-Already reviewed First off- its a very head bangin' track. Reminds me of AC/DC. Although, I can't help but thinking singing would drastically help it. Overall its a solid track of simply laying down a good tempo

Fist face floor- Already reviewed. This is very similar to track slip to fade, other the verse notes are more enjoyable to listen to. Short sweet, to the point. Its a good quick listen

Just to be home- A nice song to kick back to with just enough reverb. Ahh good stuff. I can't help but wish for lyrics. If you sang, it would be at least twice as good

Who's watching the fire- Reminds me of slip to fade but the chorous is well defined. This is a solid track. I can imagine hearing it when someone scores a goal in hockey. Good pump up song.

Lexi is love- I like it- Reminds me of story of my life or over the hills and far away. Very nice melody you got there. Great lead and rhythm

Oil it up- This one is a good melody and all- but it does not have the same appeal your other lyricless songs have like Lexi is love. It is missing a defining feature

KRW-Aww yee. That is all. I see the shred lives

Pill popping fun- Haha this is awesome! If you used this riff into a full blown song it would be a winner.

Running from the past- Another song that would be absolutely incredible with vocals and a sad solo. Great so far

Shoot bang bang- Relentless riffs- I like it. Quick and satisfying

Slide- Nice quick mix. A great listen

Overall a good album. My favourite songs of yours are : Summer sun, Rollercoaster, I want, and Too far away I believe its called. All of which have you singing. I see a pattern hate! lol

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PostSubject: Re: ADDICTED NATION ( DEMOS ) FINAL CUT ADDED 8/12/09   Fri Jul 31, 2009 1:52 am

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Addicted nation intro- To be honest- if this wasn't an intro song I wouldn't think it would be acceptable. But since it is, I'd say leave it. Listening to this is something to think about- soothing

Addicted Nation- I see why you made this the album name. Very headbang worthy. If it were up to me I would make that heavy shred around 1:30 the chorous just because its so damn awesome.

Summer Sun- Already reviewed this. Here it is again lol. It surprised me how you could successfully capture almost a pop song so well. This is the kind of song I would want to dance with if I had a special someone to be with. This song pretty much makes me think about my past automatically without me even listening to the lyrics. This is a very powerful track. If there was a jaw dropping solo in the middle it would be the best love? song ever. Once again props. Out of the 3 songs this is so far my favourite.

Slip to fade-Already reviewed First off- its a very head bangin' track. Reminds me of AC/DC. Although, I can't help but thinking singing would drastically help it. Overall its a solid track of simply laying down a good tempo

Fist face floor- Already reviewed. This is very similar to track slip to fade, other the verse notes are more enjoyable to listen to. Short sweet, to the point. Its a good quick listen

Just to be home- A nice song to kick back to with just enough reverb. Ahh good stuff. I can't help but wish for lyrics. If you sang, it would be at least twice as good

Who's watching the fire- Reminds me of slip to fade but the chorous is well defined. This is a solid track. I can imagine hearing it when someone scores a goal in hockey. Good pump up song.

Lexi is love- I like it- Reminds me of story of my life or over the hills and far away. Very nice melody you got there. Great lead and rhythm

Oil it up- This one is a good melody and all- but it does not have the same appeal your other lyricless songs have like Lexi is love. It is missing a defining feature

KRW-Aww yee. That is all. I see the shred lives

Pill popping fun- Haha this is awesome! If you used this riff into a full blown song it would be a winner.

Running from the past- Another song that would be absolutely incredible with vocals and a sad solo. Great so far

Shoot bang bang- Relentless riffs- I like it. Quick and satisfying

Slide- Nice quick mix. A great listen

Overall a good album. My favourite songs of yours are : Summer sun, Rollercoaster, I want, and Too far away I believe its called. All of which have you singing. I see a pattern hate! lol
This is what i need byd , TRUTH ! I do have lyrics for about half the ongs so far and i just need to get over this summer cold so i can kill the songs with my singing , i got a buddy thats a great singer and i may have him do some work on it for me .. Also you will love this , I wrote some lyrics that are for a child ( lexi ) and ita about a bird with a broken wing and im going to use lexi to sing this little song and im going to make a kick ass solo song ( bluegrass) with lexi singing in it .. But before the album is done i will say 17 out of 25 songs will have vox , and the ones that dont will be around 2 to 3 min long with solos..
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PostSubject: Re: ADDICTED NATION ( DEMOS ) FINAL CUT ADDED 8/12/09   Fri Jul 31, 2009 2:00 am

I look forward to it, also, can you send me my favourites in mp3? I love em so much

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PostSubject: Re: ADDICTED NATION ( DEMOS ) FINAL CUT ADDED 8/12/09   Fri Jul 31, 2009 2:15 am

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I look forward to it, also, can you send me my favourites in mp3? I love em so much
ANYTHING FOR YOU BYD .. I just need to do it .. Look for them in the next few k..
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PostSubject: Re: ADDICTED NATION ( DEMOS ) FINAL CUT ADDED 8/12/09   Fri Jul 31, 2009 6:54 am

damn i still didn't do the whole album. i'll be back in a sec with it... all 20 songs
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PostSubject: Re: ADDICTED NATION ( DEMOS ) FINAL CUT ADDED 8/12/09   Fri Jul 31, 2009 12:00 pm

Legendary!

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PostSubject: Re: ADDICTED NATION ( DEMOS ) FINAL CUT ADDED 8/12/09   Fri Jul 31, 2009 3:31 pm

ok so i made short reviews of all the songs that you sent me and here is what i have to say about them. actually this is more of how i see them fit the album.

1) addicted nation intro - must have, the name pretty much explains it
2) addicted nation - another must have. some kind of a speech could work wonders with it. something like guns'n'roses had on civil war only more about drugs and that s***
3)cold day in july part 2 - slam it in the middle. actually the "cold day" part of the album should be the 2nd out of three parts on the 3rd of 4 parts when you try to divide it into some kind of grouping. i can also see words "semper fi" or "never forgotten" at it's end
4) coming home - a bit longer song that would work well somewhere at the end of the album
5) fist, face, floor - pretty good that gets your attention. before cold day or a part of a build up for that part. could work with an intro like "hey sucker!" or sth in that manner

6) just to be home - good one. and that's the only thing i see benefiting this song to actually be on the album since it could be a really nice closure. and let's not forget that this song is one of my personal favorites
7) krw - f***ing good stuff in this one. a bit hard to fit in the album but not impossible
8) lexi is love (wild flower) - don't know why but i prefer to call this song wild flower. well this could make another good ending especially with lexi saying sth in the end. maybe even mix her laugh in the song?
9) must be love - now this is what i'm talking about! this + krw would fit as a unity like beer and peanuts. this my friends is a big combo like seek and destroy / metal militia only in way slower version
10) oil it up - ok can someone smack me over the head because i don't see it. an intro of the next album or an outro for sure, but not exactly "addicted nation"

11) pill poppin' fun - must have. simple as that. and that's how good it is. could benefit from sth like "yea right, i just need a sec"
12) running from the past - i like it. actually i like it so much that i see it fitting into one special place and you'll see that on my suggested album
13) shoot, bang, bang! - this is the one i'm using as the ringtone on my cell. and it can really bring up the atmosphere before the end but it could also go after pill poppin'
14) slide - same thing as the before mentioned shoo, bang with the difference that it's not my ringtone and that it can't go after pill poppin'
15) slip to fade - MUST HAVE!!! right after shoot bang bang

16) slipping down - ok yea i see it workin' there. or maybe there. nah one place that is perfect isn't filled and i think this song can get the job done
17) summer sun - sure it could have an interesting twist. especially if used between the last 2 songs to shake it up once more
18) the great evil - it works, and works, and works and then it changes. and it works even better, especially for the album. oh you baby are gonna have a special place in my harem (ok hate's album)
19) who's watching the fire - damn i really like this song. not too aggressive and has a nice show of skill. but how the f*** do you fit it in? pretty much the follower of oil it up with being a logical successor to it
20) you got me - nah you don't. well there is a place where i see it hanging around. and it's a good place for it. maybe even another combo?

to make things easier i'll put a suggested album in the next post because i wrote this thing and i got lost
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PostSubject: Re: ADDICTED NATION ( DEMOS ) FINAL CUT ADDED 8/12/09   Fri Jul 31, 2009 4:01 pm

now the album how it made sense in my head. and this is just one version of it that i think could work out fine.
1) intro
2) addicted nation
3) pill poppin' fun
4) shoot, bang, bang!
5) slip to fade
6) fist, face, floor
7) the great evil
8) cold day in july
9) running from the past
10) cold day in july part 2
11) slipping down
12) slide
13) must be love
14) krw
15) wild flower
16) just to be home

the alternate ending would be:
13) summer sun
14) yesterday OR you look good on me (both could work, didn't try it out)
15) you got me
16) krw

now this was a bit hard with working only the instrumental with little to no lyrics. but both cases can work pretty decent. and the first would take up 31mins and 52 secs (ok some things could be added from the suggestions but even then it's not longer than 40 mins), and the second takes 43 mins. so it's a big album with a lot of songs but not too long.
now any questions that you guys might have i'll be happy to answer
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PostSubject: Re: ADDICTED NATION ( DEMOS ) FINAL CUT ADDED 8/12/09   Fri Jul 31, 2009 4:14 pm

styx wrote:
now the album how it made sense in my head. and this is just one version of it that i think could work out fine.
1) intro
2) addicted nation
3) pill poppin' fun
4) shoot, bang, bang!
5) slip to fade
6) fist, face, floor
7) the great evil
8) cold day in july
9) running from the past
10) cold day in july part 2
11) slipping down
12) slide
13) must be love
14) krw
15) wild flower
16) just to be home

the alternate ending would be:
13) summer sun
14) yesterday OR you look good on me (both could work, didn't try it out)
15) you got me
16) krw

now this was a bit hard with working only the instrumental with little to no lyrics. but both cases can work pretty decent. and the first would take up 31mins and 52 secs (ok some things could be added from the suggestions but even then it's not longer than 40 mins), and the second takes 43 mins. so it's a big album with a lot of songs but not too long.
now any questions that you guys might have i'll be happy to answer
damn ! this is what i need .. real help .. thank you !!
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