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PostSubject: Darkness Surrounds Me (Poem)   Wed Sep 16, 2009 5:59 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Darkness Surrounds Me (Poem)   Wed Sep 16, 2009 6:22 pm

Wow...

Just.... wow. I like that one a lot man, that is fantastic. I don't know if I got the right imagery from it, but when I read it I saw myself, the loner that I am, enjoying myself and content with my life, even though the world is going to Hell in a hand basket.

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PostSubject: Re: Darkness Surrounds Me (Poem)   Wed Sep 16, 2009 6:23 pm

Wow the title of this poem is the same as one of the lines in something I wrote. I really like it. The shades of black try to unveil the secrets? That's interesting imagery different than I would first expect but I quite like it. I can imagine the room and how the different shades of gray and black dance across the open cold iron floor from the busyness of lights outside (but the corner never really gets hit by the light). At least that's the image it paints in my head. Great one Shady +rep!
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PostSubject: Re: Darkness Surrounds Me (Poem)   Wed Sep 16, 2009 6:33 pm

Axeforhire wrote:
Wow...

Just.... wow. I like that one a lot man, that is fantastic. I don't know if I got the right imagery from it, but when I read it I saw myself, the loner that I am, enjoying myself and content with my life, even though the world is going to Hell in a hand basket.

That was awesome, + rep

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PostSubject: Re: Darkness Surrounds Me (Poem)   Wed Sep 16, 2009 6:56 pm

really nice matey!...

heres one...

The Heart, the Soul & the messenger
The One They have abandoned

1000 years 1000 forms crawling and howling

I have seen the Lesser Gods die
I have seen the Mortal Ones scream in horror

The ground cries...
Through the spines of the living
Twilight hymn

Yet the Watchers Guard
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PostSubject: Re: Darkness Surrounds Me (Poem)   Wed Sep 16, 2009 7:30 pm

You are a wordsmith

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