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PostSubject: Corrupted Nation (Poem)   Wed Feb 10, 2010 4:16 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Corrupted Nation (Poem)   Wed Feb 10, 2010 5:50 pm

Loving it man
I really enjoy the way you ended it
You should write lyrics

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PostSubject: Re: Corrupted Nation (Poem)   Wed Feb 10, 2010 6:01 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Corrupted Nation (Poem)   Wed Feb 10, 2010 6:34 pm

Yeah that one was more of a rap than a poem lol, always love the positive feedback guys, thanks Smile

If anyone needs lyrics for a song etc I can try, but I've never really done it before.
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PostSubject: Re: Corrupted Nation (Poem)   Wed Feb 10, 2010 6:36 pm

Yeah I could totally see that first paragraph as the chorous + Rep

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PostSubject: Re: Corrupted Nation (Poem)   Wed Feb 10, 2010 7:54 pm

I like it, especially the fourth line. A little money can go a long ways if you use it right. There are so many cheap yet amazing hobbies in the world, and ways to be less wasteful if one only turns down unnecessary comfort. The difference between $0 and $1000 is food and water, but the difference between $1000 and $1,000,000 is just a bit of luxury.
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PostSubject: Re: Corrupted Nation (Poem)   Wed Feb 10, 2010 9:17 pm

So deep , Your stuff is alwas so great .. You need to try to get your stuff out there where the world can see it ...
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PostSubject: Re: Corrupted Nation (Poem)   Fri Feb 19, 2010 1:37 am

good stuff dude!
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PostSubject: Re: Corrupted Nation (Poem)   Fri Feb 19, 2010 6:59 pm

That's pretty damn good. I love your poetry, it's very linear but very good.

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