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PostSubject: My Lyrics   Sun Mar 28, 2010 2:18 pm

Alright, I've started working on some music, and I'd like some criticism on my Material.

The first one I've written:

A Maggot Infested Wound

A wound sustained by the edge of a blade
Flesh maimed and mangled deep is your pain
Torn and tainted the mutilation sickens
Becoming maggot provisions

Chorus
Gorey and grisly blood starts to ferment
Crusty and festering pus runs thick
Rancid and rotten reaking of death
A revolting maggot feast to witness

Writhing and squirming the fucks gorge deeper
Flesh encases becoming their cradle
Digging and eating and shitting and breathing
You maggot infested abhorrence

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A conclusive deed of ungrateful aversion
Larvae spew from parasitical cunts
Left to rot your wound your perversion
A beings of malevolent ruin
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PostSubject: Re: My Lyrics   Sun Mar 28, 2010 3:38 pm

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PostSubject: Re: My Lyrics   Sun Mar 28, 2010 3:56 pm

i guess they're good if you're into that kind of stuff. The flow is nice.
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PostSubject: Re: My Lyrics   Sun Mar 28, 2010 5:39 pm

Death metal is my favorite.

Thanks you two.
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