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PostSubject: Some poetry by yours truly   Wed May 05, 2010 10:55 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Some poetry by yours truly   Wed May 05, 2010 10:58 pm

I wanna go back and find my short story

I was quite proud of it.
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PostSubject: Re: Some poetry by yours truly   Wed May 05, 2010 10:58 pm

Please do! =)
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PostSubject: Re: Some poetry by yours truly   Wed May 05, 2010 11:00 pm

the world needs more ladies like you.
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PostSubject: Re: Some poetry by yours truly   Wed May 05, 2010 11:01 pm

Razz I am flattered.. but I think if there were more of me I would have to kill them off.
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PostSubject: Re: Some poetry by yours truly   Wed May 05, 2010 11:04 pm

And become their queen lol.
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PostSubject: Re: Some poetry by yours truly   Thu May 06, 2010 12:06 am

Are you moving to northern Indiana soon?

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PostSubject: Re: Some poetry by yours truly   Thu May 06, 2010 1:02 pm

Silly, I'm moving to Ohio. :p Eastrn Indiana
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PostSubject: Re: Some poetry by yours truly   Thu May 06, 2010 7:44 pm

You are a great person

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PostSubject: Re: Some poetry by yours truly   Thu May 06, 2010 8:30 pm

Very Happy Thank you for the nice feedback everyone
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PostSubject: Re: Some poetry by yours truly   Fri May 14, 2010 10:58 am

The first one was pretty graphic but I like the idea of using something as romanticized (you cannot deny that it is) as poetry and twisting it to suit your own needs. People would be like, aw you write poetry? And your like yeah, want to read it? *shock ensues* Never read "beef curtains" in a poem before, haha.

I LOVE the second one though. It's really beautiful. Ophelia is my muse and it reminded me of her so I automatically liked it.

The third one is good as well, I like "Your body lost the color that once emit light" the best.

+ Rep for the second poem.
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PostSubject: Re: Some poetry by yours truly   Sun May 23, 2010 11:36 pm

I like the first one. :mis:

Though it is a bit graphic, I think it is the best of the 3. All good works...my C in english is very reuputable.
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PostSubject: Re: Some poetry by yours truly   Mon May 24, 2010 11:56 am

Anyone noticed it's been ages since Senrae last posted? Sad
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PostSubject: Re: Some poetry by yours truly   Tue May 25, 2010 9:12 am

:c I had no internets! (And barely any atm)

& THANKS GUYZ C:
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PostSubject: Re: Some poetry by yours truly   Tue May 25, 2010 12:32 pm

Senrae's back! cheers
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PostSubject: Re: Some poetry by yours truly   Wed May 26, 2010 6:13 pm

Wow, very good poetry, you have a very good rhyme scheme also, which is hard to do.

I tip my imaginary top hat to you.
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