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PostSubject: Re: Some of My Works   Fri Jun 04, 2010 3:27 pm

What are the essays on, kind sir?
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PostSubject: Re: Some of My Works   Fri Jun 04, 2010 6:32 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Some of My Works   Fri Jun 04, 2010 6:37 pm

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I'm doing two things at the moment.

I'm expanding on "The Locust", adding A LOT more pages to it, and I'm also writing a few narrative essays.
Nice. Looking forward to reading more of The Locust. I really enjoyed that.
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PostSubject: Re: Some of My Works   Fri Jun 04, 2010 6:44 pm

I've named the main character Langston Moore. :o
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PostSubject: Re: Some of My Works   Fri Jun 04, 2010 6:55 pm

Langston Moore...sounds like a scientist name to me. Razz
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PostSubject: Re: Some of My Works   Fri Jun 04, 2010 6:59 pm

Lol, well he is a scientist in the story. Very Happy



But with the name like Langston what image comes to mind?
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PostSubject: Re: Some of My Works   Fri Jun 04, 2010 7:02 pm

Yeah, that's why it's good. Very Happy

It's an intelligent, upper class sounding name so I do kinda get an image of a pretty intellectual guy.

How exactly are you expanding it though? Are you adding something to to whats already there or are you adding something entirely new to it?
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PostSubject: Re: Some of My Works   Fri Jun 04, 2010 7:08 pm

I'm adding way more detail.

Right I'm writing about his time on Earth before the voyage, then I'll give way more detail about the actually space journey and some of the events that occur during that (it was a twenty year span in the short story, that's a lot of time to skip), then their progression on the new planet and more of what they've done until the eventual downfall of the society, and then much more focus on the dystopia that was created because that's where the huge change happens and the story shifts focus.

Also, I'm including journal entries that Langston wrote throughout the long years to give insight from his perspective and not just that of a narrator.
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PostSubject: Re: Some of My Works   Fri Jun 04, 2010 7:11 pm

Sounds great. Are you doing this for school or something or is it just a hobby?
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PostSubject: Re: Some of My Works   Fri Jun 04, 2010 7:14 pm

Just a hobby.



Gives me something to do over summer, so I don't get lazy.
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PostSubject: Re: Some of My Works   Fri Jun 04, 2010 7:16 pm

Damn, I've never been able to write like that. You'd get a perfect grade for a story like that, man. Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Some of My Works   Fri Jun 04, 2010 7:25 pm

It's gonna turn more into a novel of sorts with how long it'll be...... >.>
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PostSubject: Re: Some of My Works   Fri Jun 04, 2010 7:41 pm

I'll still read it. Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Some of My Works   Fri Jun 04, 2010 9:27 pm

Kc is gonna be a great GODDAMN science fiction writer.
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PostSubject: Re: Some of My Works   Sat Jun 05, 2010 1:15 am

Okay, I've finished the first page, and I'll post it.

But this may be the only part I post until I'm completely finished, so I rather hope you enjoy.
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PostSubject: Re: Some of My Works   Sat Jun 05, 2010 1:15 am

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PostSubject: Re: Some of My Works   Sat Jun 05, 2010 11:45 am

Is this post-apocalyptic? It's very well written and very visual. Very Happy I wannt more!!
This kind of also reminds me of this psychological exercise my literature teacher did on our whole class. :O Where we had to imagine ourselves in a desert, we see 5 things and have to describe how we visualize them/what comes to mind... a box/cube, a ladder, a horse, a storm, and an organic thing (if there are any). Then he told us what they meant to us/what they represented depending on what we visualized them as.--sorry that was leaning off topic XD
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PostSubject: Re: Some of My Works   Sat Jun 05, 2010 1:47 pm

Yes, it's post-apocalyptic, but they are still on Earth.

Thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed.


So, the things you visualized, what did they say about you?
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PostSubject: Re: Some of My Works   Sat Jun 05, 2010 1:59 pm

Hm. Razz Well. It different for each person because everyone visualized something else.

My Box/Cube:
A cube made up of grey soil with bent tree branches and roots wrapping around it, were the roots turned into blood vessels and some areas on the branches were human entrails.
-Box/Cube represents person who visualized them; my teacher told me that I was kind of really organic/disturbed.

My Ladder:
Was an endless spiral staircase made out of human ribs
-Ladder represent person's support system; mine's kind of fragile.. lol I have no super close frandz, only myself

My horse:
My horse was a giant fire breathing cyborg horse
-Horse represents the person's lover; My teacher said that it was me looking for this intimidating/strong hero figure to come save me from my most inner misery

My Storm:
A flaming cloud blanketing the sky bursting with bloody rain that was boiling hot, kind of like lava.. but blood.
-Storm represents future problems you have to face; teacher didn't know what to say

Organic thing:
Mine was this vine that came out of random holes in the grounds with flower bulbs on them, and when they bloom it's an icy flower that freezes everything around it over.
Flower represents my art/artisticness or something. Kind of different.

:O Teacher was confused. I was kind of embarrassed being the only one he didn't know how to answer.
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PostSubject: Re: Some of My Works   Sat Jun 05, 2010 2:00 pm

What do you visualize? :geek: I'mma tell you what I think they meannn
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PostSubject: Re: Some of My Works   Sat Jun 05, 2010 10:25 pm

Wow, all of those really are out of the ordinary, I bet everyone else had something like, "A Unicorn", or "A Painter's Ladder".

At least yours were very unique, and just means that you're a complicated and deep person.
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PostSubject: Re: Some of My Works   Sat Jun 05, 2010 11:02 pm

Lol yeah for the most part. One of my friends had a victoria's secret box that only he knew what was inside. xD
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PostSubject: Re: Some of My Works   Sun Jun 06, 2010 12:43 am

You weren't allowed to peak inside his box? :0
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PostSubject: Re: Some of My Works   Sun Jun 06, 2010 10:41 am

Naw. I don't like pink boxes. D:
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PostSubject: Re: Some of My Works   Sun Jun 06, 2010 10:41 am

That was good, Blood. Looking forward to the full story. Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Some of My Works   Sun Jun 06, 2010 11:37 pm

i happen to LOVE pink boxes

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PostSubject: Re: Some of My Works   Mon Jun 07, 2010 11:54 pm

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i happen to LOVE pink boxes
I happen to LOVE you.
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PostSubject: Re: Some of My Works   Mon Jun 07, 2010 11:54 pm

It's a trap Brute, he loves me too!!
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PostSubject: Re: Some of My Works   Mon Jun 07, 2010 11:56 pm

Silence!!
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PostSubject: Re: Some of My Works   Tue Jun 08, 2010 12:03 am

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PostSubject: Re: Some of My Works   Fri Jun 11, 2010 1:19 am

3 some? im in

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PostSubject: Re: Some of My Works   Fri Jun 11, 2010 4:18 pm

You, you get sloppy seconds.
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PostSubject: Re: Some of My Works   Sun Jun 27, 2010 12:45 am

Fuuuck, this is coming along slowly, I've only written four pages, four solid pages, but only four pages nonetheless.
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PostSubject: Re: Some of My Works   Sun Jun 27, 2010 2:24 am

There is such a thing as fillers KC lol
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PostSubject: Re: Some of My Works   Sun Jun 27, 2010 2:04 pm

Why would you water down something?
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PostSubject: Re: Some of My Works   Sun Jun 27, 2010 2:36 pm

Well, it will hold readers in till you give them another good part, Idk, I don't know the finer parts of writing.
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PostSubject: Re: Some of My Works   Sun Jun 27, 2010 9:24 pm

Filling something with superfluous material does not enthrall a reader, it bores them.
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PostSubject: Re: Some of My Works   Mon Jun 28, 2010 2:36 am

Perhaps you are right.
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PostSubject: Re: Some of My Works   Tue Jun 29, 2010 7:43 pm

he is the writer after all....just saying.....

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