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PostSubject: a poem i wrote after my girlfriend left me    Wed Jul 21, 2010 7:26 pm

there she stood with my heart in her hand grasping at life and draining my hope.
with each pulse an echo answers constricted by firm claws.

death by heart ache ,distorting my mind , the soulless creature hiding in plain sight , piercing my soul ,
yet i do not want this agony to end ,why because i love this agony as it is a part of me that reminds me of the foul creature .
her beautiful face haunts me tempted by the desired unthinkable .

there she stood , with my heart in her hand in the arms of another .
she will always be my poison.
i am destitute in a land of darkness where i am only half a being.

( id be greatfull if you didnt poke fun at this )
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PostSubject: Re: a poem i wrote after my girlfriend left me    Wed Jul 21, 2010 7:53 pm

Are you Josh?

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PostSubject: Re: a poem i wrote after my girlfriend left me    Wed Jul 21, 2010 8:12 pm

Are you Disturbed?
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PostSubject: Re: a poem i wrote after my girlfriend left me    Wed Jul 21, 2010 8:24 pm

breakyoudown wrote:
Are you Josh?
nope im a friend of shane b / shady
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PostSubject: Re: a poem i wrote after my girlfriend left me    Wed Jul 21, 2010 8:25 pm

Master Cthulhu wrote:
Are you Disturbed?
i think everyone is abit at times
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PostSubject: Re: a poem i wrote after my girlfriend left me    Wed Jul 21, 2010 9:57 pm

Oh I never knew you were Shady's friend. Thanks for sharing the poem. I would expect those feelings wouldn't last forever, but probably leave a permanent effect nonetheless.
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PostSubject: Re: a poem i wrote after my girlfriend left me    Wed Jul 21, 2010 10:14 pm

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Oh I never knew you were Shady's friend. Thanks for sharing the poem. I would expect those feelings wouldn't last forever, but probably leave a permanent effect nonetheless.

haha yeah we go back quite a while ,it was quite a while ago i only decided to put it up today iv got a feeling i was quite fucked up after all that im good now but its kind of cringing feeling if i bump into her in the street ah well shit happens Very Happy i guess you have to be ready to deal with it
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PostSubject: Re: a poem i wrote after my girlfriend left me    Wed Jul 21, 2010 10:38 pm

man, ASE is totally Josh
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PostSubject: Re: a poem i wrote after my girlfriend left me    Wed Jul 21, 2010 10:40 pm

nope im not josh Very Happy i have had this account for more then a year now i havent been on for a while maybe josh has the same name but with caps or some slight difference
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PostSubject: Re: a poem i wrote after my girlfriend left me    Thu Jul 22, 2010 1:33 am

Didn't you eat her face after this?
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PostSubject: Re: a poem i wrote after my girlfriend left me    Thu Jul 22, 2010 11:58 am

i find the best words come out when you are not in a sound state of mind.
happiness=shitty writing.

good poem though.
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PostSubject: Re: a poem i wrote after my girlfriend left me    Thu Jul 22, 2010 6:02 pm

sarainadream wrote:
i find the best words come out when you are not in a sound state of mind.
happiness=shitty writing.

good poem though.
thanks man it means allot to hear that
and i do believe a man once said depression is the smart mans happy
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PostSubject: Re: a poem i wrote after my girlfriend left me    Fri Jul 23, 2010 4:34 pm

I am Shady and I approve of this poem ^^.
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PostSubject: Re: a poem i wrote after my girlfriend left me    Fri Jul 30, 2010 11:46 am

Shady's a bard, as are all his bard friends it would seem.
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