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PostSubject: The Journal of Akiyama Tatsuki    Mon Jul 11, 2011 2:34 am

This is a 5 chapter story written by a former friend of mine, we don't speak anymore but I thought the book was genius so I continue to whore it out. Sadly five chapters in he quit because it was giving him nightmares so it is unfinished but its still a good read I'll post the writers cafe link and copy the prequel in here.



http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/Endrance-teishu/599798/



What would you say if someone told you that spirits and demons roamed the earth? What if all the stories you heard as a kid weren't just stories? I'm here to tell you that they aren't some made up nonsense. They are true in every sense of the word.

When you see a shadow looming in the corner, it is not just your imagination. When you hear footsteps, it is never the house's age. The moaning that you hear all around you isn't the wind. Lastly, your pet doesn't hide under your bed because he's scared of the rain.

The shadow is someone you know that passed away, or a spirit just trying to find its rest. The footsteps come from someone who has lost their body and isn't ready to leave their home just yet. The moans and groans are the last moments of someone's life. And your dog can feel the energy around him being manipulated, and sense those who have passed.

You might wonder why I say these things. Why I challenge the norms that society has set, and why I insist my beliefs. The answer to that is simple. I am a rational person who found out that the world isn't quite as logical as I would have thought it to be. I've seen things that most people, including myself, wouldn't believe.

My name is Rei Kobayashi, I am 19 years of age, and this is the story of the strange and horrific happenings that I have witnessed.

I warn you now: This story will not have a happy ending.
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PostSubject: Re: The Journal of Akiyama Tatsuki    Mon Jul 11, 2011 2:49 am

I think I'm going to wimp out till day to read this one ahah

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PostSubject: Re: The Journal of Akiyama Tatsuki    Mon Jul 11, 2011 3:01 am

Haha, it's very well written Japanese style horror so I honestly can't say I blame you. Though I'll call you a pussy and say I read all five chapters in one night in the dark : P
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PostSubject: Re: The Journal of Akiyama Tatsuki    Mon Jul 11, 2011 12:30 pm

Man! That was so good! Did he tell you how it was going to end? It stops at such a heightened moment.

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PostSubject: Re: The Journal of Akiyama Tatsuki    Mon Jul 11, 2011 12:40 pm

Ah god....I so wanna read more of that!
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PostSubject: Re: The Journal of Akiyama Tatsuki    Mon Jul 11, 2011 12:50 pm

Blackstar how does this end, what does he do with the ruby?!

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PostSubject: Re: The Journal of Akiyama Tatsuki    Tue Jul 12, 2011 10:41 am

No idea. As stated I don't speak to him anymore (last words he spoke to me involved go to hell and never set foot in my house again) and I was waiting on him to finish it. I know his boyfriend told me he quit writing because he wasn't sleeping at all so. I guess the only thing to do is make a writers cafe and bug the shit out of him.
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PostSubject: Re: The Journal of Akiyama Tatsuki    Tue Jul 12, 2011 12:02 pm

Ah well, what a strong story though. Yeah I've heard of authors getting too terrified of their own book before

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PostSubject: Re: The Journal of Akiyama Tatsuki    Tue Jul 12, 2011 3:15 pm

Its a shame he didn't finish it.
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PostSubject: Re: The Journal of Akiyama Tatsuki    Tue Jul 12, 2011 3:23 pm

Oh I see. Yeah facial disfigurement kind of freaks me out too. And ominous fear. So the general direction of this story couldn't be better or worse.
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PostSubject: Re: The Journal of Akiyama Tatsuki    Tue Jul 12, 2011 3:29 pm

If a girl asks me Am I pretty? I am pulling out the gasoline and pouring it on myself

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PostSubject: Re: The Journal of Akiyama Tatsuki    Tue Jul 12, 2011 3:41 pm

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If a girl asks me Am I pretty? I am pulling out the gasoline and pouring it on myself

From my personal experience that is a trick question anyway and this should be the proper course of action regardless.

I'm also halfway between being a depressed wreck and a cynical asshole right now so take my comments as you will.
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